Question about She Spawn. Now with tease of the custom

**sculpey** · April 27th, 2004, 06:57 PM

This is from the card on the original:

"Throughout history, numerous Spawns have graced the earth including female Spawns. A talented tracker and warrior, She-Spawn spends all of her time hunting. She stalks both angels and Violators, taking them on single handedly unlike our hero, Spawn, who takes the more passive approach."

I'm, no editor, but that last sentence sure seems like it could have used some tidying up.

**Darkest Angel** · April 27th, 2004, 07:01 PM

...Celine Dion was a normal woman of, at best, debatable talent when Malebolgia came to her with an offer: If she would agree to serve him in the next life, he would give her stunning successes that were otherwise totally inexplicable in light of her limited abilities! After years of subjecting unwitting mortals to her soul-searing "songs", Celine died in a terrible treadmill accident...now, she is She-Spawn!!!

**Guyver** · April 27th, 2004, 07:01 PM

Originally posted by sculpey:
This is from the card on the original:

"Throughout history, numerous Spawns have graced the earth including female Spawns. A talented tracker and warrior, She-Spawn spends all of her time hunting. She stalks both angels and Violators, taking them on single handedly unlike our hero, Spawn, who takes the more passive approach."

I'm, no editor, but that last sentence sure seems like it could have used some tidying up.

<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Kool, thanks. Not alot there but I am sure I can come up with something.

-megalithanod · April 27th, 2004, 07:04 PM

Originally posted by -Dark Angel-:
...Celine Dion was a normal woman of, at best, debatable talent when Malebolgia came to her with an offer: If she would agree to serve him in the next life, he would give her stunning successes that were otherwise totally inexplicable in light of her limited abilities! After years of subjecting unwitting mortals to her soul-searing "songs", Celine died in a terrible treadmill accident...now, she is She-Spawn!!!

<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">LOL